This was funny, thanks for making and sharing
The Case of the Lost Littles
Jonathan J. Duck is a woodland detective. He's just hung up his shingle and is looking for business. He is called upon to find some missing woodland children. Will he find them in time? Play to find out.
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Alright, I have to admit, you got a laugh out of me for "The letter E", and add-ons. I still don't know if I got a full inventory or not. I learned so much though..
And the fact the game got so insulted when I said no for the first case.
It is pretty short, and given the context of the fox, I was prepared for a different endings or more choices. Because of that, the built up and ending felt anti-climatic. I think if you wanted to, you could expand this out further.
The beginning was very strong and humorous, it got me invested, so I'm giving points for that.
There were spelling mistakes, and grammar issues. Not sure if you used Twine or not, but I had a huge issue right in there for the same reason. I ended up having to write everything in google docs first so I can use the plug-ins to help me.
Congratulations on the submission! I feel like you have a lot of promise, this could be a whole series of JJ Duck Case.
Thanks for the kind words. I fixed the spelling and grammar issues (I think). I did use Twine. Likewise, I did find it kinds of limiting and a little confusing as my game grew.
I definitely plan to make more games in the series when I get time.
nice, but short game :) I chose to look for all the missing children :D